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The potentiality of computer-based feedback in fostering EFL learners’ writing performance, self-regulation ability, and self-efficacy beliefs

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The purpose of the present study was to explore how learners’ writing performance, self-regulation, and self-efficacy were affected by implementing computer-based feedback in writing classes. To do so, a convenience sample of 42 Iranian male upper-intermediate EFL learners were selected from two writing classes in a branch of Islamic Azad University. After measuring the proficiency level of the participant using the Oxford quick placement test, the two classes were randomly assigned to the experimental and control groups. As a pretest and posttest, both groups took the writing test, the writing self-regulation scale, and the second language writing self-efficacy scale. In addition, they took part in 12 sessions where the experimental group received computer-based feedback through the application of Writing Planet, and the control group practiced the traditional approach. The results of MANOVA and paired-samples t-tests indicated that the experimental group’s performances on the writing test, the self-regulation and the self-efficacy scales improved significantly. The findings of the study highlighted the point that computer-based feedback is an appropriate alternative for traditional teacher-centered classrooms.

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Appendix A

Jacobs et al.’s (1981) scoring rubric.

 

Level

Criteria

Content

30–27

Excellent to very good: knowledgeable; substantive; thorough development of thesis; relevant to assigned topic

26–22

Good to Average: some knowledge of subject; adequate range; limited development of thesis; mostly relevant to topic, but lacks detail

21–17

Fair to Poor: limited knowledge of subject; little substance; inadequate development of topic

16–13

Very Poor: does not show knowledge of subject; non-substantive; not-pertinent; or not enough to evaluate

Organization

20–18

Excellent to Very Good: fluent expression; ideas clearly stated/supported; succinct; well-organized; logical sequencing; cohesive

17–14

Good to Average: somewhat choppy; loosely organized but main ideas stand out; limited support; logical but incomplete sequencing

13–10

Fair to Poor: non-fluent; ideas confused or disconnected; lacks logical sequencing and development

9–7

Very Poor: does not communicate; no organization; or not enough to evaluate

Vocabulary

20–18

Excellent to Very Good: sophisticated range; effective word/idiom choice and usage; word form mastery; appropriate register

17–14

Good to Average: adequate range; occasional errors of word/idiom form, choice, usage, but meaning not obscured

13–10

Fair to Poor: limited range; frequent errors of word/ idiom form, choice, usage; meaning confused or obscured

9–7

Very Poor: essentially translation; little knowledge of English vocabulary, idioms, word form; or not enough to evaluate

Language

25–22

Excellent to Very Good: effective complex constructions; few errors of agreement, tense, number, word order/function, articles, pronouns, prepositions

21–18

Good to Average: effective but simple constructions; minor problems in complex constructions; several errors of agreement, tense, number, word order/function, articles, pronouns, prepositions but meaning seldom obscured

17–11

Fair to Poor: major problems in simple/complex constructions; frequent errors of negation, agreement, tense, number, word order/function, articles, pronouns, prepositions and/or fragments, run-ons, deletions; meaning confused or obscured

10–5

Very Poor: virtually no mastery of sentence construction rules; dominated by errors; does not communicate; or not enough to evaluate

Mechanics

5

Excellent to Very Good: demonstrates mastery of conventions; few errors of spelling, punctuation, capitalization, paragraphing

4

Good to Average: occasional errors of spelling, punctuation, capitalization, paragraphing but meaning not obscured

3

Fair to Poor: frequent errors of spelling, punctuation, capitalization, paragraphing; poor handwriting; meaning confused or obscured

2

Very Poor: no mastery of conventions; dominated by errors of spelling, punctuation, capitalization, paragraphing; handwriting illegible; or not enough to evaluate

Appendix B

An essay scored using the Jacobs et al.'s (1981) rubric.

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Appendix C

Writing Self-Regulation Scale

Items

Not at all

A little

Adequately

To a great extent

1. Was the overall goal of the task clear and void of ambiguity to you as a learner?

    

2. Was the task appropriate to your current English proficiency level?

    

3. To what extent did the task help you to apply classroom learning to the real world?

    

4. Was the topic of the task stimulating and appropriate to your age and educational level?

    

5. To what extent was the topic familiar to you and related to your background knowledge?

    

6. To what extent were the instructions clear and concise?

    

7. Were the target reader and the features of the expected response (e.g., word/time limits, register) clarified in the instructions?

    

8. Were any sample texts provided for you either by the teacher or by the textbook?

    

9. Did you spend time on brainstorming, gathering information, or outlining before starting to write?

    

10. Did the teacher familiarize you with techniques such as listing or clustering the ideas, or ask you to share your ideas in groups?

    

11. Did you go through the second stage of putting ideas into sentences or paragraphs without concern for mechanics such as spelling or punctuation?

    

12. Did you revise your jotted down ideas to make sure of their sensibility and accurateness to the reader?

    

13. Did you receive feedback on content from the teacher or perhaps a peer in this stage?

    

14. To what extent did you edit your writing for grammar and structure?

    

15. To what extent did you edit your writing for word spelling?

    

16. To what extent did you edit your writing for punctuation, before submitting it?

    

17. Did you receive feedback on form from your teacher in this stage?

    

18, Did you read out your texts finally to the class or your peers?

    

19. Was the teacher's feedback on the completed piece of writing motivating?

    

20. To what extent did the task performance occur outside classroom environment (e.g., in a library or language lab)?

    

Appendix D

Second Language Writing Self-Efficacy Scale (SLWSS).

Items

Strongly disagree

Disagree

No idea

agree

Strongly agree

1. I feel confident about writing in English

     

2. I know how to write well in English

     

3. I write in English with an underlying logical organization

     

4. If I put in the needed effort, I am sure I can become a good writer in English

     

5. I can write essays that are relevant and appropriate to the assignment

     

6. I present my point of view or arguments accurately and effectively when writing in

English

     

7. I am sure I can do well on writing courses even if they are difficult

     

Appendix E

Screenshots of the writing planet program.

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Sherafati, N., Mahmoudi Largani, F. The potentiality of computer-based feedback in fostering EFL learners’ writing performance, self-regulation ability, and self-efficacy beliefs. J. Comput. Educ. 10, 27–55 (2023). https://doi.org/10.1007/s40692-022-00221-3

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