Scaffolding Instruction of Chinese Essay Writing with Assessment as Learning

  • Cheng Gong
  • Chee Lay Tan
  • Chee Kuen Chin


This article shares ideas of how to teach writing through activities based on constructivism and scaffolding. The findings suggested that there is little relation between teacher’s feedback and students’ writing improvement. Instead, the relation is found between the numbers of communication seeking feedback the students send out.


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Authors and Affiliations

  1. 1.Singapore Centre for Chinese LanguageNanyang Technological UniversitySingaporeSingapore

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