Balancing Precision with Clarity

  • Michael Alley


Einstein’s advice to keep the language as simple as possible, yet no simpler, calls for a balance between being precise and being clear.


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Authors and Affiliations

  1. 1.College of EngineeringPenn State UniversityUniversity ParkUSA

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