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Product to Process: The Efficacy of Hybrid Feedback in Academic Writing Classrooms for Fostering Process-Oriented Writing

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Automatic Writing Evaluation (AWE) systems have emerged as a possible solution to give immediate feedback to writers. This chapter explores if the combination of AWE and teacher feedback, hybrid feedback, may support process-oriented writing by promoting assessment for learning (AfL) and assessment as learning (AaL). The current study explores if hybrid feedback resulted in differences in approaches to writing by comparing a class that received hybrid feedback and a class that received only teacher feedback in an English for Academic Purposes (EAP) writing classroom. This study is part of a more extensive study, and the chapter focuses on writing processes by examining students’ scores, the Writing Process Questionnaire, and selected individual case analyses. The findings suggest that the combination of feedback may help motivate students to revise and write more often and facilitate autonomous learning.

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    Graduate Record Examination (GRE) is a standardized test which is a requirement for many graduate schools in the US and Canada and the Graduate Management Admission Test (GMAT) is a standardized test for many MBA programs. Both tests have an essay portion with similar evaluation criteria.

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Table 17.1 Criterion Trait Feedback Analysis for Criterion for Version 19.3.0

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Woodworth, J. (2023). Product to Process: The Efficacy of Hybrid Feedback in Academic Writing Classrooms for Fostering Process-Oriented Writing. In: Chong, S.W., Reinders, H. (eds) Innovation in Learning-Oriented Language Assessment. New Language Learning and Teaching Environments. Palgrave Macmillan, Cham. https://doi.org/10.1007/978-3-031-18950-0_17

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